What's wrong with this...?

pgn · ‎05-01-2019

Spotted a leader in a news item earlier this week that had me wondering what was wrong with it:

Subconsciously (not unconsciously!) something appears to be off with it, don't you think ?

"ravaged" would suffice.

Or "rampaged through".

But not "ravaged through", surely?

I dunno.

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dgilbert2 · ‎05-01-2019

..."fire quickly spread through...."?

pgn · ‎05-01-2019

... "fire quickly consumed"...?

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MI5 · ‎05-01-2019

Not cool to use an adjective and adverb together....

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pgn · ‎05-01-2019

@MI5 wrote:
Not cool to use an adjective and adverb together....

So just... "fire spread through"...?

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MI5 · ‎05-01-2019

That works....

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