on 11-02-2021 14:04
on 13-02-2021 20:18
on 13-02-2021 20:18
@Pennywren wrote:@Mi-Amigo lovely words. Paints a lovely picture in my head.
darkness
There is pain in my heart,
Where do I start?
I only wanted to help,
You threw that back at me.
It hurt what you said.
I try to help,
You fight me.
This darkness blossoms,
My heart cold.
The ache is real,
You said things,
Things that can't be unsaid.
My blood runs cold.
I care thats who I am
I care too much.
It always bites me somehow.
At night I feel it keenly
The darkness on the edge of my mind.
The fear swallow me.
I curl up,
I cry, but you don't care.
Sorry darker poem. Am hurting 😥
I feel for you. However, your ability to put into words how you are feeling is astonishing. Be proud of that and I hope in some way it lessens the pain to post your words on here
Veritas Numquam Perit
on 13-02-2021 20:24
on 13-02-2021 20:29
on 13-02-2021 20:29
@Pennywren wrote:
It helps. Am no good at talking about how I feel yet it cones easier in poem form.
Veritas Numquam Perit
on 13-02-2021 20:32
on 13-02-2021 20:48
on 13-02-2021 20:48
@Pennywren wrote:
darkness
There is pain in my heart,
Where do I start?
I only wanted to help,
You threw that back at me.
It hurt what you said.
I try to help,
You fight me.
This darkness blossoms,
My heart cold.
The ache is real,
You said things,
Things that can't be unsaid.
My blood runs cold.
I care thats who I am
I care too much.
It always bites me somehow.
At night I feel it keenly
The darkness on the edge of my mind.
The fear swallow me.
I curl up,
I cry, but you don't care.
Sorry darker poem. Am hurting 😥
So sorry you are hurting. You have an amazing ability of expressing your feelings in words and I hope that goes some way to helping ease the pain. You have no reason to apologise for a "darker" poem.
Thank you for sharing it.
on 13-02-2021 20:53
on 13-02-2021 21:11
on 13-02-2021 21:11
I don`t see anything "daft" @Pennywren
I see a mindscape in words and a tapestry of thoughts as expressive as the craftwork you create, all of which you should be proud.
on 13-02-2021 21:18
on 13-02-2021 22:03
on 13-02-2021 22:03
The pain, the anguish, inside a head
As poems emerge, here to be read
On phone
Not alone
All read in awe, you have street cred!
Keep writing, rhyming, soliloquising,
In verse and stanza, feelings disguising;
Keep your cool
Nobody's fool!
All here read you, it's unsurprising.
T'is the force of limerick
Written here, double quick!
Feelings out
Roundabout
Keep on writing, make it stick!
@Mi-Amigo loves to riff,
@Anonymous also wiv'
That @pgn!
And @Pennywren?
It's great, says @Cleoriff!
on 13-02-2021 22:06
on 13-02-2021 22:06
@pgn wrote:The pain, the anguish, inside a head
As poems emerge, here to be read
On phone
Not alone
All read in awe, you have street cred!
Keep writing, rhyming, soliloquising,
In verse and stanza, feelings disguising;
Keep your cool
Nobody's fool!
All here read you, it's unsurprising.
T'is the force of limerick
Written here, double quick!
Feelings out
Roundabout
Keep on writing, make it stick!
@Mi-Amigo loves to riff,
@Anonymous also wiv'
That @pgn!
And @Pennywren?
It's great, says @Cleoriff!
Just mind-blowing @pgn
Veritas Numquam Perit